Pun-Wisp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Prostitute Mickey 2]

Not bad

Not bad overall, though I didn't laugh through any of it. Though I like this kind of humour, odd I didn't find any of it funny. Anyway, though its short, its not bad. Good job

[Cell V.S Brolly]

Not bad

Pretty good flash, though not a bad broly fan vid, anyway people REALLY over exaggerate on how powerful broly is... Cell and broly are almost Equal, if you think Broly would be a god match for omega, thats like giving a elephant steroids(omega) and the elephant trying to kill a bunny(broly) thats the kind of comparrison. People really think to highly of broly, he isnt as powerful as you think. Kid buu, super buu(mystic buu is stronger then kid buu), vegito, gogeta, SSJ2's(not adult gohans) mystic gohan, janemba and so on can beat broly quite easy.
Broly was very powerful during the time of the cell games, past that, goku and vegeta got stronger. The way fans have been acting, its like when broly wa sin the 2 movies, that wasnt his full power, and that broly can just magically power up a couple trillion in a instance, which he wa sonly in the billions range...
Broly can't even reach ssj2 or 3, because of how he is, he constantly powers up like what trunks did against cell, only he doesnt lose speed.

Anyway Nice job

S-E5000 responds:

Very opinionated i see lol. Yeah Brolly is intense but compared to some of those you put up he'd get his ass kicked.

Anyway glad to see you enjoyed it

[Dbz a Different Path]

Eh it was ok if you spent time on it.

You did do quite well, and I respect that. But it really looked like it was rushed and not really thought through. The grammar through out the flash wasn't very good, I've caught 22 grammar mistakes, thats including spelling errors. If you're going to make DBZ flash, then actually make it sound DBZ, no offense but its like turning DBZ into a more childish version. "shut up or I'm going to blow your head off!" Blow your head off? "Cell: We must run away and think of a strategy". Ok for one cell is bent on becoming perfect and why the hell would he say "run and think of a strategy". Thats just not him, not only that you have changed personalities of some of the characters. No offense but just by watching this I know your 9-13(your 13). You did a good job flash wise, pretty good I must say, even the sounds arn't bad, but story wise and trying to make the characters right you arn't very good at, also I know short factor in person, hes my nephew, and he can do a far better jobs, just by viewing his other videos, not only that Most of his flash vids have atleast a rationg of 4.0 or higher, you have a average between 2-3, and you say he can't make better? judging by what you have said about him, your pretty cocky and ignorant, no offense.

[The Master Games Ep 1]

Great Job

yea it has been quite a while hasnt it? anyway GREAT flash movie, i would give it 8/10
for simple reasons

1.) its VERY obvious you disqualified shadow, i didnt even have to watch it to decide who would be disqualified... you do what others do, you still do it constantly. STOP HAVING MARIO AND SONIC ALWAYS THE LAST!! you do it in every movie you have these characters in, its getting old... now if you did shadow and sonic, that would have surprised me, you need to start thinking of different "character" choices, because you really need more choices.

Plus you adding yourself to the movie also made it quite funny to me, at least then you can think of some cool ideas. Well i love this flash movie, great effects, ideas etc. Next time you want to impress the hell out of us and make a good flash movie, either dont involve your most common 3 characters(you know who they are), create your own, or surprise us by using cool/popular ones we wouldnt expect. Sure you can use those, but make them lose or something.

You did a very good job at animating those sprites you made of yourself 10/10 on that.

guess i should go to my last point. Dragonball Zish type of fighting is getting old, if you want to be the best, always surprise, impress, blow there mines with things they didnt expect. i picked 5 things i most likely would have seen in this movie, and i did.

Also great song, goes great with he fights :)

also, if you replied to this, i would rather you call my new cell phone(no home phone) just call my dad and ask, or email me, i dont go on msn or yahoo messenger much.

if you want some ideas for the next one email me, i got some ideas that should add some twists and it would blend in great with whats currently going on :)

[Not Another Sprite Fight]

hahaha funny still some improvement

to me you did excellant, i thought zero was going to be out longer, but i guess not.
Still the movie needs so improvement, you need to add more detail
(on some of the effects it just looked like one color) we should have seen all those characters at there full strengths, things like super sonic. im rather surprised you had Mario win. you should have a "Choose your ending!" Now if only you could create your own characters, your own sounds. or get permission from all those creators, you could make some money. Its sad Samus wasnt present in this....
anyway whats with your new logo? no offense but your older one was better, that new symbol looks rather chesy... use old one.

you know whats funny? my brand new dell computer(vista) can run over 66 applications at once without slpwing down the computer one inch. I played this at high quality, plays just fine, its just your computer that you need to go low on. it doesnt need to be at medium, if someoens computer is a good one. they can play them at high.

anyway 9/10!!!!!! great job!!

Short-Factor responds:

HA HA HA VISTA!!!!

[Waffle X: Episode Two]

sounds ok

actually the the sounds are fine, its just you need to be more realistic with them, i know it may be hard to keep a constant diff voice but in the beggining when the waffle yells? you need to actually yell and be a bit louder for the waffle guy, also better if you keep the characters still! not where the outlines and everything moves, they dont need too at most points, but good job on this

[DBZ Vegetto's Bloodlust 1]

um

umm... it was ok... looks like you got a little carried away with it lol, on the next one try to hit the reality of dbz and not to cuss so much on it, makes it sound stupid, use words such as, damnit shit etc, not the cruel ones liek bitch jackass,fuckker etc
goodf job though, just hit the actual reality and nto get carried awya and your movies will be much better
dont get offended by this is you are, if you are offended im sorry

[DRAGONBALL Z]

lol

heh pretty funny
it seems goku didnt do any damage
until he killed him with spirit bomb
only thing that was wrong was.....
a ssj can use a spirit bomb, ssj powers up and using a spirit bomb the person o ssj would accidently absorb it
goku met this mistake in android 13 movie, thats why he waits till after its ready then go ssj!!!
you should make a remake of it, make it longer, more action,funnier
and such

[Chase & Arnold,my version]

?

lol more practice and also, try to change ur voice... the same voice every time... make ur voiced deeper with arnir and mimic his accent

[Tomorrow's Nobody DVD]

lol

funny
also its Condoms not condums