Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: Prostitute Mickey 2

date: March 20, 2009

Not bad overall, though I didn't laugh through any of it. Though I like this kind of humour, odd I didn't find any of it funny. Anyway, though its short, its not bad. Good job

Score: 8

"Not bad"

submission: Cell V.S Brolly

date: June 10, 2008

Pretty good flash, though not a bad broly fan vid, anyway people REALLY over exaggerate on how powerful broly is... Cell and broly are almost Equal, if you think Broly would be a god match for omega, thats like giving a elephant steroids(omega) and the elephant trying to kill a bunny(broly) thats the kind of comparrison. People really think to highly of broly, he isnt as powerful as you think. Kid buu, super buu(mystic buu is stronger then kid buu), vegito, gogeta, SSJ2's(not adult gohans) mystic gohan, janemba and so on can beat broly quite easy.
Broly was very powerful during the time of the cell games, past that, goku and vegeta got stronger. The way fans have been acting, its like when broly wa sin the 2 movies, that wasnt his full power, and that broly can just magically power up a couple trillion in a instance, which he wa sonly in the billions range...
Broly can't even reach ssj2 or 3, because of how he is, he constantly powers up like what trunks did against cell, only he doesnt lose speed.

Anyway Nice job

Score: 6

"Eh it was ok if you spent time on it."

submission: Dbz a Different Path

date: May 30, 2008

You did do quite well, and I respect that. But it really looked like it was rushed and not really thought through. The grammar through out the flash wasn't very good, I've caught 22 grammar mistakes, thats including spelling errors. If you're going to make DBZ flash, then actually make it sound DBZ, no offense but its like turning DBZ into a more childish version. "shut up or I'm going to blow your head off!" Blow your head off? "Cell: We must run away and think of a strategy". Ok for one cell is bent on becoming perfect and why the hell would he say "run and think of a strategy". Thats just not him, not only that you have changed personalities of some of the characters. No offense but just by watching this I know your 9-13(your 13). You did a good job flash wise, pretty good I must say, even the sounds arn't bad, but story wise and trying to make the characters right you arn't very good at, also I know short factor in person, hes my nephew, and he can do a far better jobs, just by viewing his other videos, not only that Most of his flash vids have atleast a rationg of 4.0 or higher, you have a average between 2-3, and you say he can't make better? judging by what you have said about him, your pretty cocky and ignorant, no offense.